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今天GJXX小編搜羅了北大附屬嘉興實驗學(xué)校同文部小學(xué)英語創(chuàng)意寫作獲獎作品展示（低年級組）希望給擇校的家長們提供參考。

立足傳統(tǒng)，面向未來同文部小學(xué)

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同文部小學(xué) 英語創(chuàng)意寫作獲獎作品展示

在同文小學(xué)部，英語寫作是一件快樂的事情。學(xué)期末同文小學(xué)的英語老師們對同學(xué)們的寫作作品進(jìn)行了評比，快來看看獲獎同學(xué)的作品吧。

In Tongwen primary school, English creative writing is a happy thing. At the end of the semester, the English teachers evaluated the students' writing works. Come and have a look at the works of the winning students.

-Grade 1  一年級-

If I Were an Animal  

如果我是動物

作者：Noah  國籍：中國  

指導(dǎo)教師：Patrick&Zack

If I were an animal, I would be a snake. I would have sharp teeth and fangs.I will use my fangs to inject venom into people.I will be sneaky and everyone cannot see me!I can even live in the sea. Everyone will stay away from me. I eat meat, vegetables and even people.If I saw everyone, I will eat them. “hahaha!”I would cry before I devoured them. If anyone sees me they will be extremely scared and they will run so far from me and they will run so fast. Faster than a car. They will say:“Help! There’s a snake, a huge snake, RUN!”I will chase them and they couldn’t run faster than me. If Mr.A sees me, I will eat him, too! “Ha ha ha!”

如果我是動物，我想成為一條蛇。我有鋒利的牙齒和尖牙。我會用我的毒牙向人們注射毒液。我會鬼鬼祟祟的，每個人都看不到我！我甚至可以住在海里。所有人都離我遠(yuǎn)點。我吃肉、蔬菜甚至人。如果我見到所有人，我會吃掉他們?！肮?！”我會在吞食它們之前哭泣。如果有人看到我，他們會非常害怕，他們會跑得離我很遠(yuǎn)，跑得很快。比汽車還快。他們會說：“救命！有一條蛇，一條大蛇，快跑！”我會追著他們，他們跑不比我快。如果A先生看到我，我也會吃掉他！“哈哈哈！”

I’m a Dolphin

我是海豚

作者：Osborn   國籍：中國  

指導(dǎo)教師：Patrick&Zack

If I were an animal, I would be a dolphin. I would have sharp teeth to eat fish in the ocean.I would jump in the waves and I would play ball all day long. I would go to the zoo because it is so fun, I can play much more. I have a tail. I use my tail to swim fast and to eat fish.I would have a big mouth to swallow the little fish. I would have a lot of fish to eat. The zoo is so fun and I saw Mr.A in the zoo.I said “Hello!”Mr.A said “Hello!” to me. I play ball and Mr.A swims with me. I am so happy and Mr.A goes to the next place. I say:“Bye” to Mr.A. Mr.A says “bye” to me, and I was so happy.

如果我是動物，我想成為一只海豚。我會有鋒利的牙齒去吃海里的魚。我會在海浪中跳躍，整天打球。我會去動物園，因為它太有趣了，我可以玩得更多。我有一條尾巴。我用尾巴游得快，吃魚。我會有一張大嘴巴來吞下這條小魚。我會有很多魚吃。動物園很有趣，我在動物園里看到了Mr.A。我說“你好！”A先生說：“你好！”對我來說。我打球，Mr.A和我一起游泳。我很高興，Mr.A去了下一個地方。我對A先生說：“再見”。A先生對我說“再見”，我很高興。

-Grade 2  二年級-

Alex the Cat and the Ugly Monster

Alex的貓和丑陋的怪物

作者：Aaron   國籍：中國 

指導(dǎo)教師：Samina&Zack

Alex lives under the sea. Alex is very small. Her home is cute and it's never cold. Alex likes reading about monsters. Alex is crazy and she's silly. There are lots of burgers and coke bottles in her house. Alex is a magical cat. She doesn't like noise, but she likes running and eating with her sister. She isn't very big, but she is so happy.

It's a sunny Sunday morning, and Alex wants to play with her toys. However her stepfather says “Go to school!” So Alex goes to school. 

Later that morning, she meets a horrible monster. The horrible monster has a very big head and a mouth with black teeth. He has blue ears with hair on them. He has a small tummy like a goat. The ugly monster says “You look so fed up. Can I help you?” Alex thanks the hideous monster and the frightful monster gives her one wish. Alex asks to play with her toys. 

Then suddenly the repulsive monster disappears, and Alex wakes up. She gets out of bed to check if she still needs to go to school. 

Alex住在海底。Alex很小。她的家很可愛，而且從來不冷。Alex喜歡讀關(guān)于怪物的書。Alex瘋了，她很傻。她的房子里有很多漢堡和可樂瓶。Alex是一只神奇的貓。她不喜歡噪音，但她喜歡和姐姐一起跑步和吃飯。她不是很大，但她很高興。

這是一個陽光明媚的周日早上，Alex想玩她的玩具。然而，她的繼父說:“去上學(xué)!” 所以Alex去上學(xué)。

那天早上晚些時候，她遇到了一個可怕的怪物。這個可怕的怪物有一個非常大的頭和一個有黑色牙齒的嘴巴。他的耳朵是藍(lán)色的，上面有毛。他有一個像山羊一樣的小肚子。丑陋的怪物說:“你看起來很厭煩。我能幫你嗎?” Alex感謝可怕的怪物，可怕的怪物給了她一個愿望。Alex 要求玩她的玩具。

突然，那個令人厭惡的怪物消失了，Alex 醒了過來。她從床上爬起來，看看是否還需要去上學(xué)。

The Shocked Knight

震驚的騎士

作者：Bolin  國籍：中國   

指導(dǎo)教師：Samina&Zack

Once upon a time, there was a knight called Link, and he was brave. Link had a friend called Colin, and Colin had a Switch games console, and Link had a wicked dog. They lived in a high-tech house. 

One windy afternoon, Link wants to play Switch with Colin, but his wicked dog says “NO!!! YOU CAN’T PLAY WITH COLIN!!! READ THE BOOK!!!”

Later that afternoon, Link meets a witch. The witch has red ears, a black face, blue hair, pink hands, and green feet. The witch always eats blunt pencils. The witch is grotesque. 

The witch says “You look upset. Can I help you?” 

Link thanks the witch and the witch gives him 1 wish.Link asks to play with Colin for 5 years. 

Then suddenly the witch disappears, and Link wakes up. He runs to Colin’s home but Colin is already playing the 2-player game with his friend Shloe, and Link is shocked. 

從前，有一個騎士叫Link，他很勇敢。林克有一個朋友叫Colin，Colin有一個Switch游戲機，Link有一只邪惡的狗。他們住在一所高科技房子里。

一個刮風(fēng)的下午，Link 想和Colin玩Switch游戲，但他的惡狗說：“不！?。∧悴荒芎虲olin玩?。?！讀這本書?。?！”

那天下午晚些時候， Link 遇到了一個女巫。女巫有紅色的耳朵，黑色的臉，藍(lán)色的頭發(fā)，粉紅色的手和綠色的腳。女巫總是吃鈍鉛筆。這個女巫很古怪。

女巫說：“你看起來很沮喪。我能幫你嗎？” Link感謝女巫，女巫給了他一個愿望。Link要求和Colin一起玩5年。

然后突然，女巫消失了，林克醒來了。他跑向Colin的家，但Colin已經(jīng)在和他的朋友Shloe玩雙人游戲，Link感到震驚。

-Grade 3  三年級-

All About A  

關(guān)于A

作者：Daniel  國籍：中國  

指導(dǎo)教師：Brian&Ruby

In April me and my friend Kyle went to America to see our English teacher, Miss Abby. We couldn’t find Miss Abby. 

Me and Kyle had an appetite. We found the most awesome restaurant named Al’s. We ate some ant appetizers. We ate some angry alligator applesauce. We also ate some small animals. 

After that we arrived at our airplane. We acted like we were astronauts. We flew through the air up, up and away!

四月，我和我的朋友Kyle去美國看我們的英語老師Miss. Abby。我們找不到Miss Abby。

我和凱爾有胃口。我們找到了最棒的叫做Al's餐館。我們吃了一些螞蟻開胃菜。我們吃了一些憤怒的短吻鱷蘋果醬。我們還吃了一些小動物。在那之后，我們到達(dá)了飛機。

我們表現(xiàn)得像宇航員一樣。我們在空中飛起來，飛起來，飛走了！

A Time I Was Late 

有一次我遲到了

作者：Ka Man 國籍：中國香港 

指導(dǎo)教師：Brian&Ruby

One day I forgot my homework at home.I went back home to get it. When I got home there was a big dragon using it’s fire to light my homework. I quickly did my homework once more. 

I left for school again. 

On my way to school I saw the gingerbread man. He said, “giddy up, giddy up, as fast as you can! You can‘t catch me I’m the gingerbread man!” I was hungry so I chased after him. 

Finally, I caught him and ate him all up. 

Then, I heard a farmer say, “Can you help me catch my chickens and ducks so I can separate them?” I decided to help the farmer. It was hard work separating the ducks and chickens!

Once I was finished, I ran off to school. I was just in time for the school bell. Oh no! I had lost my homework! I ran back to the farm. A duck was making paper airplanes with my homework and flying it into the mud puddles. 

I plucked it from the mud, wiped it off and ran back to school. My teacher was there with her arms folded. I said, “wow, do I have a story for you!”

有一天我把作業(yè)忘在家里了。我回家拿了它。當(dāng)我到家時，有一條巨龍用它的火點燃了我的作業(yè)。我很快又做了一次作業(yè)。我又去上學(xué)了。

在我上學(xué)的路上，我看到了姜餅人。他說：“快，快，快！你追不上我，我是姜餅人！”我餓了，所以我追他。最后，我抓住了他，把他吃光了。

然后，我聽到一個農(nóng)民說：“你能幫我抓我的雞和鴨，這樣我就可以把它們分開嗎？”我決定幫助那個農(nóng)民。把鴨子和雞分開是一項艱苦的工作！

我一做完就跑去學(xué)校了。我剛好趕上上課鈴。哦，不！我把作業(yè)丟了！我跑回農(nóng)場。一只鴨子正在用我的作業(yè)做紙飛機，然后把它飛進(jìn)泥坑里。

我把它從泥里拔出來，擦干凈，然后跑回學(xué)校。我的老師雙臂交叉在那里。我說：“哇，我有故事給你聽嗎？”